Life hands out a few surprises from time to time one of which, for me, was the difficulty in getting my cover artwork which took something close to a year and then my frustration with the company I had decided to publish with. Still, I used the time productively, reading through my novel again and ensuring it was what I genuinely considered to be the best it could be at that time. The lack of progress broke my resolve and, as a result, I decided to look around and, taking advice from another author I knew, I eventually got in contact with Fiction4All. Within a day, the company's owner and editor had replied with some very useful advice and within two I had had a partial and constructively critical review as well as the kind of advice I needed to progress again. Fiction4All advised me to be patient and that it would take several weeks to create an eBook. The book, I was told, was to be considered for a print edition and would be put on sale globally including in the UK, UK and Australia. They gave me a reasonable overview of timescales and told me some of the stuff that was coming up within the company, stuff that could help authors like me. The editor came back with constructively critical comments in effect saying not much happened in the first chapter and I agree... it is, or rather was, a slow burner. It was clear there were some uncertainties...Fiction4All were prepared to give my book a go but made some gentle suggestions such as creating an opening action sequence and addressing the early low levels of conversation. I gave that some thought and, acknowledging F4A's expertise, decided that the best course of action was to temporarily withdraw my novel and make some changes.
So, two months later, I have finally resubmitted my first book having made the following changes:
- A new "prologue" chapter which provides a high-action opening sequence but carries on to create some links for material later in the book. The action sequence is loosely based on a real-life battle and tries to deal with the fact that on companies such as Amazon, the potential reader can "look inside" to get a feel for a novel.
- Simplified sub-headings for all chapters to provide a clear location and date with all chapters now following a logical timeline and relatively little reference to past events.
- Information segments moved to the Appendices, significantly shortened compared to the book's earlier iteration. Detailed information is still available but, rather than burden the book with it, it has been moved to the web at my own website, James C. Rocks (click on "Background" and "The Extent") The Extent.
- More conversation sections have been added into the novel.
- "Drop-back" sections have been removed and reintroduced in shorter and more plot relevant ways so that they no longer disturb the story flow.